fix: ✏️ Typos and improvments part 2

reglement-en.tex

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 \usepackage{titlesec}
 \usepackage{tikz}
 \usepackage{lmodern}
+\usepackage{parskip}
 
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     \section*{\textsc{Preamble}}
 
-    The purpose of this document is to define the various rules to be complied with by any person within the Organisation \emph{Rézo Metz-Rennes Fédérés} and to specify the methods of application of the statutes in force.
+    This document is the results of our efforts to translate faithfully the Internal Rules of the Organisation, but has no legal validity in itself. If despite our efforts, there are disagreements between this document and the French version, the latter prevails.
+
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+    The purpose of this document is to define the various rules to be complied with by any person within the Organisation \emph{Rézo Metz-Rennes Fédérés} and to specify the methods of application of the Statutes in force.
 
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-    This document completes the statutes of the Organisation. In case of disagreement between the Internal Rules and the statutes, the latter shall prevail.
+    This document completes the Statutes of the Organisation. In case of disagreement between the Internal Rules and the Statutes, the latter shall prevail.
 
 \section{\textsc{Subscription}}
 \subsection{\textsc{Subscription fee}}
     To become a member of Rézo, the interested person must pay a subscription fee. The subscription fee is:
 
     \begin{itemize}
-        \item 2 euros for a one week membership;
+        \item 2 euros for a one-week membership;
-        \item 5 euros for a one month membership;
+        \item 5 euros for a one-month membership;
-        \item 25 euros for a six months membership;
+        \item 25 euros for a six-month membership;
-        \item 50 euros for a one year membership.
+        \item 50 euros for a one-year membership.
     \end{itemize}
 
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     \subsection{\textsc{Services modification}}
 
-    The Rézo reserves the right to modify at any time the services offered and the rules in force on the network, with a minimum of 7 days notice. Any member who would not be satisfied with the new rules can obtain their disconnection with partial reimbursement upon notice from the Leading Committee. This refund is made on a pro rata basis for the unused period of the current subscription. \comment{Si une personne a effectué 4 mois sur 6 et qu'elle demande sa déconnexion pour modification des services, alors elle pourra être remboursée de (1-4/6)=1/3 du prix de l'abonnement de 6 mois}
+    The Rézo reserves the right to modify at any time the services offered and the rules in force on the network, with a minimum of 7 days notice. Any member who would not be satisfied with the new rules can obtain their disconnection with partial refund upon notice from the Leading Committee. This refund is made on a pro rata basis for the unused period of the current subscription. \comment{Si une personne a effectué 4 mois sur 6 et qu'elle demande sa déconnexion pour modification des services, alors elle pourra être remboursée de (1-4/6)=1/3 du prix de l'abonnement de 6 mois}
 
 \section{\textsc{Conditions of access to services}}
 
@@ -247,7 +252,7 @@
         Any member agrees not to modify this configuration without the agreement of an active member of the Rézo. Any member also agrees not to voluntarily modify the physical addresses, in particular the MAC addresses, of their network interfaces without the agreement of an active member of the Rézo.
 
     \subsection{\textsc{Use of routers}}
-        Any member agrees not to connect a router without the agreement of an active member of the Rézo. It should be noted that most Wi-Fi terminals are equipped with an internal router and are subject to this rule.
+        Any member agrees not to connect a router without the agreement of an active member of the Rézo. It should be noted that most Wi-Fi terminals are equipped with an internal router and are therefore subject to this rule.
         
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@@ -307,7 +312,7 @@
 
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-        In the event that Internet access is not possible for a member, the latter may receive, upon request to the Office, a certificate from the Organisation with the dates when the member did not have Internet access.
+        In the event that Internet access is not possible for a member, the latter may receive, upon request to the Leading Committee, a certificate from the Organisation with the dates when the member did not have Internet access.
 
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@@ -408,7 +413,7 @@
 
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-        The election must necessarily result in the appointment of a minimum Leading Committee: President, Treasurer, Secretary. The procedure in case this minimum Board is not formed is described in the statutes.
+        The election must necessarily result in the appointment of a minimum Leading Committee: President, Treasurer, Secretary. The procedure in case this minimum Committee is not formed is described in the Statutes.
 
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@@ -431,7 +436,7 @@
 
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-        Although it is not mandatory, the Rézo recommends a democratic process for the election of the Leading Committee of the Club. Likewise, although it is not mandatory, the Rézo advises to make the changes in the Leading Committee in the two weeks before the Ordinary General Assembly, in order to be able to transmit the moral and financial balance sheets, which must be transmitted before the Ordinary General Assembly, as specified in the statutes.
+        Although it is not mandatory, the Rézo recommends a democratic process for the election of the Leading Committee of the Club. Likewise, although it is not mandatory, the Rézo advises to make the changes in the Leading Committee in the two weeks before the Ordinary General Assembly, in order to be able to transmit the moral and financial balance sheets, which must be transmitted before the Ordinary General Assembly, as specified in the Statutes.
 
     \subsection{\textsc{Management}}
 
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     None.
 
 
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-The Rézo remains at the disposal of its members for any additional information.
-
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-These Internal Rules were adopted today by the General Assembly.
-
-\begin{flushright}
-Signed in Rennes, on \theday{} in 3 original copies. 
-
-On behalf the General Assembly,
-\end{flushright}
-\begin{minipage}{0.5\textwidth}
-    \centering
-	\textbf{President} \\
-    ??? \textsc{???}
-\end{minipage}
-\begin{minipage}{0.5\textwidth}
-    \centering
-	\textbf{Secretary} \\
-	??? \textsc{???}
-\end{minipage}
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 \end{document}

reglement.tex

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 \usepackage{titlesec}
 \usepackage{tikz}
 \usepackage{lmodern}
+\usepackage{parskip}
 
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